8M-  Remembrance Day story/poem is due on Thursday. Tonight concentrate on your verbs.  Are they weak or vivid?  Revise your piece for strong, active verbs. Consider the suggestions from your peers and revise accordingly. 8F-  Remembrance Day story/poem is due on Thursday. Evaluate your piece for word choice and ideas using your scoring guides.  Record your score on your draft.  Continue to revise based on your peer conference today.