Posted: February 26, 2012
Continue reading and recording. Students have been working on improving their sentence
structure. They are replacing the
standard “subject + verb” beginning with
more interesting ones. By beginning a sentence with a transition, verb form,
preposition, or adverb, sentences are transformed from simple ones to
sophisticated ones. Review your notes
and examples in your reading log.
Your fourth reading letter should be posted on the class
blog by now. The drafts, peer edits and
final copy of your current story is due on Thursday. All these parts should be submitted together. Free Choice Story Rubric Ideas- focused,
showing details- see, hear and feel it Organization- great hook, logical flow,
satisfying conclusion, paragraphs
Word choice- 3 memorable moments
(comparisons, analogies), strong verbs that reveal emotionSentence
fluency- 4 sophisticated sentences,
varied beginnings which should mean 4-5 transitions a page, varied types of
sentences- questions and exclamations as well as statements Conventions- apply the five rules to avoid “comma omissions”,
capitals, sentences instead of fragments